I'm not even done and this has been by far the most challenging chapter yet, including the whole ones. Between the chatterbox of a receptionist, and having to re-write this part, it's been a though one.
This page is entirely about the pun of the name of Runa, so I had to improvise. I am open to suggestions. If something doesn't add up. Just tell me. and I'll gladly change it. We're not being faithful to the scrip at all.
If I knew the author was going to lean in the pun so much, we could have just made a direct translation, and explain with a little note each time it happened. Oh, well.
>>2723982TOP:
Chatterbox: "Well, then, let's make your adventurer card. May I start with your name?"
Runa: "My name is Hatagami Runa."
BOTTOM RIGHT:
"Oh, that stripper someone called. You were the talk of the guild yesterday!"
"I'm not a stripper and no one called me!"
BOTTOM LEFT:
People on the background: "Did you hear? She's that stripper!"
"Is she getting naked again?"
Runa: "Eek! People are listening!"