>>2807227>That's pretty good, EXCEPT for the... well, I was going to say the armpit, but there isn't one at all. Looks really weird without it because it absolutely should be visible.I guess. See v2.
>But if I were to nitpick I'd also say you cheated by making the thorax smaller, which tells me you probably copied a chest over from other artwork,Na, I drew it.
>but there's arguably nothing wrong with that. But if you didn't and actually redrew everything, I wonder why you made it smaller. Smol = cute
>Did it just look strange?I drew it from the bottom up, making it fit the proportions from the waist up to the head. I feel it fits the proportions of waist and head ok, but it is off on matching the arms/shoulder proportion, for what ever reason. Either I fucked it up by not properly matching the waist proportions, or the original artist fucked it up by not making the arm/shoulder proportions match the hip proportions. Probably I fucked it up, given that I am a shit artist and can only do edits. Matter of opinion.
I can widen it to make it match more the original size, see V3.
>Also, you forgot about the mole on her left boob!That black smudge? That wad a mole?
