>>1556260Woops forgot to comment. I liked it a bit since your brown elf is so cute but I have a few gripes. First is be consitent on whether you wanted the man to be faceless or not. Having him faceless and suddenly showing him in the final panel kind of kills it from a "self-insert" standpoint. You probably should have shown his face in the beginning at that point. Also a tip for the bed scene parts: make the shadows a little bit lighter. You should play around more with head positioning to make your character feel more natural too.