>>1686210Sorry this took so long. I tried to go for the inkless look again, but since there's nothing to break up all that skin, I just couldn't wrap my head around it. The real solution to my problem was just to tone down the damn line weight.
Since Shino is canonically a palette-swap of Atoli (well, the other way around, I guess), it was easy to make a version with her, but it ended up being a little too spicy for /e/. You can find it here, though:
http://ecchisketch.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=47 