>>1581399Not him but this is my suggestion after seeing your fix. I was the one here
>>1580917Added a little more to the bust to even it out a little since I feel that even at that angle they shouldn't be that disproportional to each other. The arms were kind of in perspective for a person who was standing rather than laying down. The blue line is just if you really wanted to keep the arm tucked in.
This is just a suggestion so feel free to make your own judgement on it. Also I feel as though the placement of the head was fine in the first version but moving it was ok as well. Hopefully this is useful in some way and not just a big waste of time.
