>>1981396I feel like you start a line, stop and continue, stop and continue even on lines that should be one long curve or you go over a line multiple times and it makes the line look rough, don't be afraid to erase and redraw a line multiple times. Your lines all look the same weight, strands of hair should not have the same weight as the metal on her boot. Your lines should taper at their ends. Working at higher resolutions and resizing when you are done helps. I also don't color my drawings because I want to improve my line art first, after I feel like I have improved significantly I will work on my rendering skills. I also have a folder with the works and drawings of my favorite artists and look at the way they do things and try to apply it to my drawings. Go to /ic/ and read the sticky if you want to get really gud doe.