>>2830479Now that I'm a bit more awake, some other ideas...
-It could really up the tension if she were, say, stranded without her suits somehow, like that AI was overridden and stole her ship, leaving her stuck and having to get by with nothing, or it could be an alternate outcome if she makes bad choices...
-There could be an area with Federation or worse Space Pirate observation that she has to try and avoid notice during, like cameras or drones...
Not to be too critical, though! I also really enjoyed the presentation, the little 'cutscenes', and things like the AI(?) voicing the computers.
I could elaborate more if you wanted to discuss it elsewhere, or brainstorm on whatever's next.
