>>2299318OR here- when I said modeled off, I meant roughly a combination of Pachira's regular outfit and the Alzano uniform. To give you a better idea, here is a completed attempt at this request several months back.
It doesn't have to follow this exactly by any means though (the sketch I provided is already pretty different and should follow that, such as the exposed cleavage), and you look like you're doing a good job at it already.