Requesting this to be redrawn as Suguha Kirigaya and Kanamoto from Sword Art Online, please.
Main preference for changes would be to give her a more toned tummy with wide, fertile hips since she does kendo, and for her expression to be more similar to the one shown here, to show she's been corrupted to his side.
I'll provide some video links for him below since there aren't many drawings of him.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tlmxuOxyTuo&ab_channel=animewizardhttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W_n2d3NjrN4&ab_channel=TakumiAuditore20 