>>2221984I'm no anatomy expert, but at the very least I can tell you that there's an impossible gap between her thighs. You need to study anatomy, read some art guides, or draw off of reference pictures or something. You clearly drew this from memory, and you don't know what you're doing.
>>2222162Nah, I say she's pear shaped, her shoulder/bust aren't as wide as her pelvis/hips.