>>1786058Yeh I find mobile about impossible to use satisfactorily once threads reach a certain size, I just abandon it at that point and wait for the next iteration of the thread.
As far as the story goes, I'm sure some people here will like it, but unfortunately second person just weirds me out, it's so annoying to read imo. You've clearly worked hard on this and it's a shame that something so little turns me off but yeh.
I'd also second
>>1786060; if it's a really long story and not an interactive I'd recommend just copy pasta into a pastebin and linking that here so you don't have to worry about making a dozen posts.