>>1314651Her waist is too small. Normal (as in official) art of her shows really good proportions, try referring back to those. Yoko is a shining example of the female figure without going too far into fantasy.
Her left hip is too low and her breasts are a bit high. Her shoulders and forehead look a little off, but I'll leave that up to the more experiences artists to confirm/deny. Otherwise it's very good, so long as you finish her forearms and wrists.