>>1391873This is too hardcore for /e/. For an example of how to do it right, look at what princ/e/ss posted, and compare it to yours. Princ/e/ss' is cute, sparkly and generally feels warm. "Moe" if you will.
As opposed to yours which feels cold and frightening. We know exactly what is going on here.
Even a quick comparison of their facial expressions tells the difference. One is slightly embarrassed, and the other is straight up terrified.
OP's picture is also not very well drawn.