>>1718155>>1718146I'll assume you want to improve. Try to integrate the arms into the torso more- as it is, the lines you're drawing representing the torso cut into the arm far too much, making it look like it's attached by barely a thread of flesh/making it look like she hasn't got proper shoulders. Make the arms bigger, stop them from being so noodly. First image's right arm is a particular offender, you've stretched it so it'll reach to the surface the hand's resting on. On that note, if you're going to have a character be in a particular pose (Here: leaning on that... thing), you have to plan for that pose. Make a small, throwaway sketch of the entire scene before you start doind anything for the main drawing/sketch. Hell, make five, each one taking no more than ten seconds.
What's more, you'll have to work on symmetry and general anatomy. Try drawing a vertical line to orient yourself by, so you don't end up with a horrible mutant with 70% of their body weight on the left side of the body and a spine that doesn't connect properly between different sections of the body. (Not that that's exactly what happened here, it's just come dangerously close.)
Draw both eyes, even if one is going to be obscured. You can always rub it out later, and it'll help symmetrise the face.
Keep working, mate. Draw lots, draw from life, and you'll improve. Just make sure to keep having fun while doing it. Thanks for putting the time into making OC.
