>>1760710i think you should try working on how you draw faces/heads first, then slowly work into drawing bodies.
her eyes look lopsided and crossed, the mouth is kinda far from the nose. the head looks like it's facing left, while the face is facing right. her hair is fine.
her thighs should be a bit bigger, maybe shorten the length of lower parts of the legs. the right breast is slightly bigger than the left, and the right arm is longer than the left. the left forearm is shorter than the upper arm when typically it's the same length. i can tell where the elbow is on both sides of her, which is great! although there's a random line on her right, which kinda makes it look like she's wearing a glove.
try working on hands, practice makes perfect on those.
where the left bra strap connects to the cup, it looks a bit smaller than the other side. (sorry if i worded this strangely, not really sure how to refer to it) the two lines that connect the lower half of the outfit should be made into one, or you can make it slightly bigger so they don't touch as much.
there's my critique, i think you can improve really quick.
