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Anonymous Mon 11 Feb 2019 21:08:10 No.2285134 View View Reply Original Report

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What do you think of my art?

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 11 Feb 2019 21:08:51 No.2285136 Report

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I want to become a really well known pinup ecchi artist

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 11 Feb 2019 21:11:43 No.2285137 Report

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/aco/ is over there

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 11 Feb 2019 21:33:42 No.2285142 Report

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stiff, lifeless, flat, unispired, doll-like, erotic yet unnappealing. Nice pillow shading. bad construction, weak/lacking perspective, that shoe is horrendous, looks like an after thought.

overall weak fundamentally, looks like you jumped the gun and started rendering before you had your fundamentals down properly.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 11 Feb 2019 22:05:36 No.2285148 Report

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2/10 wouldn't commission for $10

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 11 Feb 2019 22:16:06 No.2285153 Report

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>>2285134
>>/ic
That said... It looks good but there is a huge room for improvement.

Sketching,proportions, perspective - all are lacking. I wont nag for shoe; but what happened with her right arm ?
Coloring is really nice and i can't give you any useful critique on it
Also shirt and panties are done great; folds are perfect (thought there might be too many), shirt collar is bit weird and there should be some shade between it and her skin if that is folding in that V shape

Whole image looks like a clusterfuck of average and good.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 11 Feb 2019 23:04:41 No.2285173 Report

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Bit bummed but oh well, I appreciate the honesty anons. I definitely agree I've got much to work on still.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 11 Feb 2019 23:32:51 No.2285182 Report

Quoted By: >>2285183

You fault for coming to /e/ with that, should've gone to /aco/ they eat up that crap and pay for it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 11 Feb 2019 23:40:04 No.2285183 Report

Quoted By: >>2285184 >>2285274 >>2285345

>>2285182

what's the difference ? I thought it was pretty much a matter of perspective what's 'western' and what isn't

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 11 Feb 2019 23:42:20 No.2285184 Report

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>>2285183
and that's why you fail

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 12 Feb 2019 00:33:59 No.2285189 Report

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Inconsistent lighting direction

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 12 Feb 2019 00:58:07 No.2285192 Report

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It looks like you focus more on color then proper proportions. Stop coloring until you get the basics. Example the legs are way too big, the foot is awkward, the pose is unnatural, you're hiding the feet and hands (probably because you aren't comfortable drawing them) The clothes look like crumpled up tin foil, the hips don't make sense, etc. Also don't post on an anonymous internet board if you don't want your feelings hurt

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 12 Feb 2019 06:18:02 No.2285274 Report

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>>2285183
that’s actually why you fail. /e/ doesn’t see merit in western shit

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 12 Feb 2019 07:35:30 No.2285345 Report

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>>2285183
Come on, it's obvious to tell at a glance which is which. Can you really not see the difference even? I can hardly believe that.

Anonymous

Anonymous ## Mod Wed 13 Feb 2019 13:12:33 No.2285753 Report

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