>>668327I'm sure /ic/ shat on you enough about the lighting but probably didn't elaborate. It looks like you wanted the source to be the main spider's eyes, so try imagining what you'd be able to see in that point of view. There's your light spots, and everything else consists of dark spots. Have a shitty imagination? Just draw a bunch of lines. Just a side note, but how about the other spider's eyes? Do they also glow?
Notice how her left arm's thinner than her right, even though it's supposed to be closer to the viewpoint. Might wanna fix that. Also, I feel like her left ring finger and pinky should be longer, or maybe that section of her palm.
Her hair is your personal style, but I'd suggest considering whether or not each clump can logically originate from her scalp and reasonably bend that way. It just looks a little too blobby and weird imo. Also, how did the spider silk wrap around her neck without touching her hair? Something to consider.
>>669331Talent is about as worthless as that stepstool you forgot you had; it might be useful at some point in your life, but you can always get what you're looking for another way.
>>669331Think about how a sword is constructed; center of mass is a little past the guard, and that specific spot should be on his back. The actual design in itself, well... you do you.
>>669458I think you'd benefit a lot from at least looking at the first Loomis (Fun With A Pencil) and DrawABox. I'm not asking you to dedicate yourself to them, just to peruse them.
