>>736964follow up for this practice a practical application of the principle in an actual character action
been sitting on this swing animation for an embarrasing amount of time
finally got around to making a proper version
albeit could've made the swing arc wider and the character smaller for more emphasis on movement but for now im satisfied
>>736970should've moved the head when he does the slitting neck gesture would've felt more organic
also a singular horizon lie would've helped imphasize the zoom ins and zoom outs
the character should've zoomed out further back before the explosion
should've aded more frames for the explosion and the following smoke
should've leaned the smoke in one direction to denote slight wind
could've optimized pacing a lot more