>>1711242I like what you're doing lad, it's a good idea, and the production quality of this is not bad. You've ostensibly got a good format.
But man that episode was fucking boring. I don't say that to attack you, but because I hope you can make it better.
So, confronting the person, is what I watched to the end for. But nothing -nothing- interesting happened in the confrontation. You edited it out for some reason. If you're going to do this, that's the interesting part. What you make of that part is what matters.
You, are boring. Basically the only thing you talk about is bicycles. Like the type of bicycle it is, your e-bike, what they're done to the bicycle. That's not interesting (in this context). You really need to lighten up, there needs to be some kind of jokes or something in there, banter, or be angrier, iunno, but it's just boring.
You didn't show installing the GPS. Or explain more stuff from that side. That is interesting and relevant.
I don't really find you complaining about the police that interesting either. Like, I do get it, and I agree with you, but so what? If police aren't going to do anything with what you're doing, either you need to make your confrontations interesting enough, work out something you could do yourself when you confront people, or stop doing it, because it seems pretty pointless.
Again, I'm saying this to try and be helpful, if it is a pilot after all, I feel like honestly if you had 1 clip of something interesting happening, your idea here could blow up, and if your whole thing was better then it could be succesful generally, so yeah, that's why i'm being negative, to try and be constructive, because I do think it's worth doing if you enjoy it and improving.
