>>62612I think you don't have anything to protect you from bad weather, I hope your matches don't get wet
sleeping pad is good idea
axe for firewood and shelter building is also good
as for the cordage you can replace paracord by spruce root, willow or lime bark cordage, or even weave something of stinging nettle
you don't need backpack if you already have blanket and tarp - add a piece of string and you have excellent horse shoe pack
you can also save points on billy can and make on of dog food cans
I'd say you did good job as this chart is for people to realize that what they really buy