>>93573heh. I like it. You sorta half assed on the personifications; for instance,
"the winds compelling influence" could be something like "the heavy breaths of the wind" (choose something that sounds less like the wind is masturbating, but you get my drift) Other than that, I like it. Enjoy the 'Fall' referring to the leaves falling as well as it being fall. I'm not that much of a poet though, more visual with my art. Wish I could write poetry like yours man. It reminded me of this painting, (even though this is of an evergreen, just the smooth soft frame and the wind whistling through the crevasses and twigs)
