>>3444252im far from an expert but here I go
>I feel that your composition lacks focus and a point of interest. Especially with the very distracting elements at the edges. I added a quick crop I did that I feel works a bit better.>The depth of field is suuuper shallow. Is that actual bokeh or artificial blur? If it's blur, please don't>I really like the colour palette and subject though, good jobstart with reading up on composition