>>4192604imo, composition isnt an end goal. composition is a response to/a tool for describing a larger event/scene. the composition in that photo is a dead-end. what is interesting about this image to a potential viewer? what about it causes me to linger on it? right now, there's nothing that does that so as an image it's not successful in my eyes. It's the difference of photography of things vs photography of ideas. ideas are what will grip a viewer.
and with that, here's a super meaningless sunset photo