>>3468811>>3468809>>3468808>720x1080>>3468811>>3468810I would have tried to catch the hoop girl much more zoomed out. As an outside viewer I need help understanding what you're trying to portray in the single shots. As a set I kind of see something but they seem like it could have told a better story. Pic related I wanted to c4op just him but I figure leave it all for something better for the viewer.. Unless its just a friend with a hoop and I'm overthinking it. I'm no pro but just my opinion. Keep shooting everyone :D