>>4305735I'll critique it.
Rear wheel is weirdly cut off instead of completely omitted or fully included.
Weird angles in background dont go well with the 90 degree angle of the car.
Super distracting foreground object.
Lighting is ugly, doesn't help accent the curves of the car.
Whole image looks way too gritty for the subject and environment.
What you should have done here is picked a completely different angle and focused more on the actual car because the surroundings have nothing of value as far as I can see.
Just my 2 cents.