>>2718866i could see what you were going for here. its actually not bad, but with a tweaks it could be better. crop that leaf off to the left out , its distracting. could do with a lil contrast oomph as well to really make those blacks and whites stick out. lastly (not sure what your budget is like) keep an eye out for a 35mm or a 50mm prime 1.8. not sure if momma would let you get close but those primes really pronounce depth of field , has excellent bokeh and really makes your subject stick out. your definitely on the right track
