>>3668434>The lighting in this one is unflattering, you need to get the key into her eye socketsI was about to get defensive, but then I looked closer and noticed that you're 100% correct, which is a bummer.
In my defense, my fuckin' off-camera flash decided to fail on me that night for reasons unclear, so I was trying to bounce off of random candy store walls and just using the store lighting for a lot of the shoot.