>>3381041I like the shot. So much so that I had a crack at it. I think the biggest problem with it is that you didn't have a clear point of focus when you shot. The two people on the right are obviously the most natural focus point, since they seem to be of interest, so I went with that - and I'm talking about point of interest not like camera focus. Enjoy my gaiboy* rendition.
*I do not suck cock, I'm just yet another terrible photog on /p/ who doesn't know anybetter but likes to take pictures and likes looking at photographs.