>>2592874It's difficult to find the line between disgust and aesthetics. I guess I would just shoot snails with shell. Also, better steer clear of a background that's supporting mud and slime.
>>2592877The picture is only interesting because of the black and white ratio, i.e. the diagonal corners of black and white. Motive and motivation are lacking.
>>2592878Align the vertical line straight and there's a decent shot.
>>2592881Nothing to complain about, also decent!
>>2592897Along with very dark portions and the shallow depth of field, the area right from the nose looks distracting.
>>2592901More wide-angle would be good to support the zigzag and the different background levels. Also less of the clouds (or more transparency) give gain.
I think of a (black and white) image in which every hill slightly decreases in saturation,
finely graded at a strong contrast.
>>2592905For this I simply lack access. I do not find it aesthetically, so I am looking for a statement. But what would it be?
>>2592912Darken the whiteboard to let it fade within a a homogenous black. Even scaled it seems quite blurred to me. Yet it's an interesting scene!
My posted picture is missing something or there's something that bothers. I have an idea but would like to get some objective help. Thanks
