>>3088902thx for the feedback anon
the character is not me, it's a friend of mine. I did all the filming, editing, etc.
it's also pretty much guerrilla filmmaking if you wanna call it that since I shot everything on location that I didn't have permits for. it's also just me and the guy in the vid (and another friend to play the demon in the second one), I didn't have any lights and only tried to make do with what available light I had in any given situation.
the first one was more of a test of what the camera can do so it feels a bit disjointed like you said, no real theme, just shots of the guy in the city, mostly to capture the feel of it a bit.
the second one I had more time to do it and think about it a bit, but again was limited by what I could achieve on my own and with the locations I could find. So I just made a fairly simple story and expanded a bit on the exploring in the first one.
>it's not highlighting what you want us to see, my eyes aren't attracted to what I feel you want me to look at, maybe too much camera shake and cuts.agreed. I need to plan my shots better. thanks for the feedback
