>>3573469correct your verticals. otherwise its just a snapshot.
>>3573482excellent picture, technically speaking. the left side could use some burning (don't need to see fat guy in the 2nd brightest part of the image)
>>3573484not your best work
>>3573489i enjoy this for reasons I can't really express.
>>3573525his expression is bland. if it was candid portraiture thats fine, but if it was a model/someone you enlisted for help then you should really work the scene and the model more.
>>3573569not sure why you wanted to include the part on the right. could have been better without it. still, I can see that this image had potential.
>>3573662boring compositionally. work the subject more next time. its an interesting plant
>>3573663kind of bland. composition needs work.
>>3573664lacks a subject to draw interest to the scene
>>3573671same as above. its just colors to me
>>3573745fence is distracting. decent if you had it without the fence.
>>3573748dead centerline horizon doesn't cut it for me. the sailor would have liked the image I'm sure, though
>>3573750shell isn't in focus and its not centered
>>3574040good composition, but seems pretty noisy/blurry for what I assume is broad daylight.
>>3574044clean your negatives. and also very much a snapshit.
>>3574166whats with the vignette? also not really feeling it. nice colors though.
My picture is for a news story. Its kind of boring but whatever. I'll have to actually edit it later instead of just doing basic shit on my phone.