>>3001508that crop job doesnt need to be that tall. right now it makes her look like a giraffe. why are her boobs in the frame. the darka round her sideboob is distracting as fuck. its throwing the balance off between her sideboob, and under the brim of her hat (the darkest parts).
also her eyeliner on the bottom eyelid...she needs to commit or dont wear it. the fact that i can see the white of the top of her eyelid is fucky, considering how much eye shit shes wearing.
>>3001973grainy af. turn down the sharpness. contrast might be a little much. theres not much range in tone. not much for gray.
>>3001977good pic. would really like him holding something to set a time as to when the photo was taken. theres a slight hint behind him, but its not clear enough to make out. considering the polaroid esque ness of the photo, the fact that i cant pinpoint a time frame is bugging me. that and really the only discernable subjects of the pic are the beer, the guy and the plants in the back. good photo. in the future, play around with items. a cell phone, or laptop would do this photo some real good.
>>3002057>>3002067>>3002056the emotion you see is coming from the fact that you were there. to those of us who werent there, her face is a little neutral. without your text, i would have just seen it as some chick at a show. in regards to sadness, it isnt quite encapsulated in this pic, but again, the text does a lot for putting it in context.
the background is a little bright, considering her shit and hair. also her necklace is distracting. kind of throws it off.
>>3002180not bad, but why? also what is she looking at? her focus is off in the distance, but not at anything in particular.
i like what you did with her lips, good lighting. and the hair.would be cool to have the plants in between you be in focus as well, or at least with more detail. would be very good for framing.
>>3001659i like this.
>>3001606back off. her face is kind of blown out. too bright.
