>>3007633Some super basic stuff wrong with this.
First of all the horizon feels off with it slanting to the left.
Secondly it feel imbalanced with the path leading to the right and the sun burst on the right, too much visual weight on that side.
Thirdly the path down the centre works if you are going for symmetry otherwise it needs to be either left or right.
Have attached my attempt at an edit but I would toss it and thats it.
