I'm a beginner too but I'll try to critique
>>3005281I think you framed this badly. maybe if you had oriented horizontally and then cropped it would have worked better. you included her belly and cut her arm off awkwardly
>>3005287not level and why did you focus on the atlas?
>>3005288she doesn't look very comfortable and somehow I want to see more of the surroundings. feels like a tease
>>3005292I like this, though it's a shame about the fuzz
>>3006020please post more in future, your work feels really unsettling, especially
>>3006014>>3007538seems very carefully done and it pays off
>>3008730lovely shot, tells a lot
>>3009812none of your shots are in focus. did you focus correctly at the time? what lens are you using?
I would test with a different lens, it's possible the one you used for these is damaged. happened recently with an old lens I bought.
>>3011155>>3011157I don't see anything interesting in these
>>3011356what the fuck? just buy a carton of cheap film there. shoot with all the same stuff, get some consistency. maybe take one or two rolls of natura just to get some night shots on the streets
here's a terrible shot I took recently :)
