>>2863757First of all, thanks for the criticism.
>7/8 is almost good if the guy was on the other side of the frameTiming my shots when the subject comes into the right place is something that I've been working on. There are some other examples from the same roll of shots that held potential, only to be ruined for the same reason (pic related).
I haven't done processing on any of these. Usually, all I do is color correction for the most part, but I'll see what I can do with processing select parts of the image like you said.
Also, I'm not sure what the burn line on the side is. If I could guess, then I believe it's from the scanning process, since the line isn't present on the negatives themselves. These were done through a local shop, so I'll ask about it the next time I go in.
