>>2896693Going deeper on this.
I would have taken one shot with them with the light.
Moved them out of frame and taken another shot with the light (to get rid of the shadow behind them because why not)
Then at least one more shot exposed for the sky, then composited the three (or more) in post.
Also, I think the other anon is right. Too contrasty in general for this kind of shoot, especially the way she is styled.