>>2607938all your lines are leading to the subject, there is no need for such a strong vignette. also because this is more editorial (and im being nice here) you dont need such a dramatic effect on the colours.
The blood is too red and the colour of the concrete goes from golden beside the subject to clue at the edges. look at the thumbnail.
also flip it horizontal, eyes read photos from left to right and bright to dark.
made it B&W but would be better if you could colour it better!
