>>3609724>>3609743Had a go at making some of the changes I would have made to slightly brighten it and get rid of "distractions". I like it, though.
>>3609752Really nice light and it's a cool contrast of stages.
>>3609813It's completely soft and not in a good way. You're not centered properly (this type of shot kinda demands it). Re-shoot it if possible.
>>3609979Agree with
>>3610007>>3610307Agree with
>>3610316>>3610376Technically sound but not very compelling.
>>3610550Based
>>3610553Would clone out some distracting elements but I can dig it.
>>3610599Get centered and straighten it out.
