>>4059928Hey, thanks for the thoughts. I guess I should've prefaced by saying I see this more as a pretty casual zine rather than a super refined photobook. That said, I still believe it needs a narrative and language that rolls throughout. I tried to have an overall arc of seasonality, rural vs urban, and an overall somber tone. I suppose that's not coming through clear enough? And yes, I'm a Westerner.
>>4059935Interesting, care to point out certain spreads/transitions?
>>4059958Well this is a year of shooting daily condensed to ~40 images. Hundreds of shots sitting in the garbage bin (pic related).
I reworked it a bit. Was told by a friend the constant double spreads was tiresome so I've broken them up and tried to introduce a bit of rhythm between double spreads and single images. Thoughts? Same link is the updated version.
https://issuu.com/122334444/docs/zine_test5 