>>3181802to me, problem with this pic is that you used the wrong focal lenght
focus is neither on people nor the environment people is into
we just see a random wall and empty space and faces are too little and not interesting to look at.
we just see the association logo on the back (which I guess it's what you were after to), but that really doesn't give us anything
composing like pic related might have been a bit more interesting to me I guess