>>4386017This is a much better example of what I'm talking about but there's the direct back of someone's head in the shot and you chopped the bottom of the motorcycle wheel off.
The only time I ever include the back of someone's head is if it's so far out of focus it doesn't matter. The guy sitting down his eyes are closed likely because he was blinking when you took the shot.
>>4386006Classic long exposure water, very nice but I would have focused more on the patterns the water makes and not the environment around it. See how mine creates an S-pattern? I know you can only do so much with a 50mm lens on these and there's usually restrictions on how close you can get, angle of approach, etc. so again I can give you a break on that.