>>3753222Too bad she has derpy eyes in this.
>>3753223Better.
>>3753461Too much window fringing imo, also focus is wrong.
>>3753557This is fugging great, exposure/colors/comp all on point. Just too bad he has a blank expression on his face and looking into nowhere.
If it weren't for that, this could totally pass for an ad or portrait piece alongside the third.
>>3753559I feel like the pose with left (right) arm is weird, looks awkward and his arm disappears. Would be stronger in a different pose.
>>3753379>>3753721Boring lighting for the concept, feels like test shots you did to check something.
>>3754370After reading the Morticia Addams background, it seems better, but I feel like you could have used a reflector or something to at least give some detail on the clothes she's wearing.
Also ease up on certain colors, like her lipstick which are clipped red (compare them to flower too). You could have gotten a better result shooting her facing the sun and the background also in shadow.
>>3755703Very nice, though a bit hot on the exposure.
>>3755705lol
>>37557062overexposed but nice
>>37557072overexposed again but boring this time.
