>>2645793tbh lad I don't see any composition to begin with. looks like you pointed your camera in the direction of some buildings and snapped the shutter. why include the power lines in the frame? why include so much sky when there's nothing to see there? why not use this as a background for a photo with a foreground subject?
very poor photograph. I'm sure you think it's edgy and cool to shoot film but that doesn't excuse being terrible at framing.
the only remotely interesting things I see in the frame are in the (pic related) crops