>>4041678I think you should crop out parts of the image so that the staircase doesn't appear too awkwardly in the center, although I like both the left and right corners so I'm not sure what you should do. The colors are nice.
>>4041643Nicely executed but I feel a bit uncertain what the subject is supposed to be. I feel like I'm on a ship due to the window and maybe I'm listening for something through the radio, maybe making notes in the book, but the items don't really seem to relate too much.
>>4041642This is awesome. Composition, framing, subject, etc. Another one said the framing is too tight. It's tight, but I don't think it is too tight. Creates a bit of suspense and that goes nice with the gas mask.
