>>3587726face contrast is good but youve got non blacks showing up on the left edge. cropping this to a portrait/vertical would help.
>>3587727hairlight to separate from background. too much light hitting the floor and her leg . its brighter than her face so pulls attention away from it.
>>3587729did you lift the shadows on this? right side seems much softer than left. seeing a lot of skin dryness where the light is comming from.
overall good crop and exposure levels.
>>3587730crop or compose so the lighter floor isn't showing up. could lift shadows a bit on this one or use a fill card.
>>3587731exposure feels a bit flat to me. white shirt could be brighter etc.
>>3588000your light is too far/ too harsh.
lift or fill shadows on her face. the lines remind me of someone auditioning for the joker.
>>3588002floor is brighter than subject. face is lit but not the rest. maybe your monitor is brighter? i can see details on my monitor but not on phone.
>>3589108i know youre not op but you got a hot pixel/ right eye reflecting some light. kinda eerie. if thats what youre going for then all good
my composition could use some work but i like the light in this. not as contrasty as OP though
