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Overall, it's a good picture.
Posetives:
The composition and color.
Negatives:
The lines in the picture and composition is drawing my eyes to the big dark circle in the background. However, since that part of the picture is out of focus it is only a bit confusing.
TL;DR: A good first step, nice colors and composition. The small step that is needed to take it from good to great is to focus on the background.
Hope this help!