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Sup guys. I'm working on a feature length screenplay ("Florida Girls") and I wanted some brutal feedback. I hope it's okay to post this here since this is a filmmaking thread.
Here are the first 11 pages. Tell me what you think and don't be afraid to be a cunt about it. It should be mentioned that I intend to direct this project.
I'm lucky enough to have some family members with pretty hefty connections in the film industry so for better or worse, this will be read by Hollywood gatekeepers eventually. Tell me why it sucks before Hollywood does.
