>>2908953>Let's see some your revolutionary portraiture work since you're an expert on it.I'll do better than that and fix yours, instead.
Friendly suggestions: rotate so her eyes are perfectly level horizontally (use grid tool in PS, short cut = CNTRL + '); crop tighter (shirt's stripes look masculine); clean up the skin with healing brush (very subtle difference); remove some of the stray hairs around her head and on her shirt (I started to but gave up).