>>3246160Wow what the fuck happened to her eyes?
But you did okay. Just watch that balance, you're erring on the warm side, which is fine, but keep an eye on it before you get used to "everything is warm" and you go overboard.
Also tilted photo is tilted, that's the only big issue, rotate to the right and it's goo.
Softness isn't too bad, I mean it's horrible, but it looks okay for a portrait.
>>3246558>Another pro-tip I haven't given is to use a macro lens (or Zeiss/Leica/whatever übersharp glass) when you want to shoot wide open.Bullshit, sharp glass doesn't have to be macro orr german. Sigma Art lenses are tack sharp wide open, for example, and so is modern fast glass in general.
As anon said, edit that cancer between her tits before bothering about that, though. Also lighting is much more important - look at her eyes, should have got some light there.
By the way I do use a macro lens for portraits, but it's just because I got it for cheap, there's nothing special about macro lenses - they're just meant to be sharper when stopped down and to focus really close, you'll find equally sharp tele lenses that aren't macro, they'll just suffer more from diffraction at f/16 or something, usually.