>>3245591If you get the focus on the ember and frame in til you're filling it you'll have a cracking shot
>>3245516I prefer your original crop but it's stronger in colour I feel
>>3245587If you're going to shoot the sky at least expose to make it interesting. Harder on a phone but it's a boring bland street shot without detail in those clouds and attention to those reflections
>>3245621Nice and soft, good work with the lighting but he's posed awkwardly and it feels fake as a result
>>3245622Can't fault it, good establishing shot for a trail series. Doesn't work well as a product shot but I don't believe that's what you're going for
>>3245625Nice muted contrast but it feels flat and still. Some movement or a bracketed flash of that tram would've given this moevement
>>3245633I can't offer anything helpful here but it stands out if nothing else
>>3245648Her earrings remind me of Skyrim. Good light, not sure what you've done to the colour but it feels very off in the darks
Focus should be on the closest eye and because of the light it feels like her dominant eye is the weaker, drawing you away from her face
>>3245695Where's this? Foreground feels out of focus, might just be the contrast work. Nice and muted yet colourful, but lacking body in the clouds. Feels like the water is a little too heavy on the cyan too
>>3245702First shot doesn't need to exist. This one offers no context and feels technically nice but ultimately the only interesting features aren't even the main subject
